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Tonight,

my tears

will blanket

the sky,

my sorrow

will darken


the corners of heaven


and my longing

will echo


across the moonless night.

Tonight I will depart
from this existence

and like meteors

our memories

will leave a trail

of bittersweet  moments.

I will be missing you

and I know


I always will.

For in the darkness
of oblivion,

your smile was


my Polaris.


My star whose light

was brighter

than anything else.

My comfort.

My sanctuary.

My Eden.


And as  my tears


blanket

the sky


tonight,


I will brave

my greatest fear.

That before the strike
of sunlight's rays,

I will not lose my star

to my fear of loving her.


I will confess my feelings.

No matter what happens.

No matter what it takes.


I am in love with you.


And I know



I always will be.
Something I wrote before I got promoted..


The last day that I will be able to see her often...
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:iconttitango:
This is really good. I like it! :D
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:iconlindseyjean324:
this poem is exactly what i have been trying to put on paper i just could never get it.. i really adore this one.. just one thing i would change.. the last line i always will.. i would make it i always will be.. i personally think it would fit better other than that two thumbs up!
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:icondamnedlostsoul:
Hmmm... I have considered your suggestion. :) It does sound better now. Thank you.
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:iconlindseyjean324:
your welcome☻
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:icondrakethefallen1:
Good job, though the layout needs a bit of work. Still, good work!
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:icondamnedlostsoul:
Thank you.. I will experiment on the layout later...
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:iconermitanyongiskagero:
ermitanyongiskagero Feb 7, 2008
3rd line from the last tol, may kulang..

iba talga pag inlab..
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:icondamnedlostsoul:
salamat... di ko napansin... yan naedit ko na...
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:iconermitanyongiskagero:
ermitanyongiskagero Feb 9, 2008
ayus lang bro..
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